The Bath Novel Award                      

The Bath Children’s Novel Award 

international prizes for unpublished & independently published novelists

NOW OPEN: The Bath Novel Award 2016

Judge: SUSAN ARMSTRONG, Literary Agent at Conville & Walsh Literary Agency

First Prize: £2,000 | Entries: £22 per novel

Submissions: Novels written for adults or young adults, first 5,000 words plus synopsis

Closing Date: 10th April 2016

Cornerstones LogoWe’re delighted to announce Cornerstones Literary Consultancy, the UK’s leading and world’s first transatlantic editing and scouting house, as sponsors of the 2016 Bath Novel Award. One lucky shortlisted author will receive their Consultancy Report, including structural critique and follow up session with an editor. Read our interview with Cornerstones’ Dionne McCulloch…

Q&A: 2016 Bath Novel Award Judge SUSAN ARMSTRONG, Literary Agent at Conville & Walsh Literary Agency


Being an agent allows me to do what I love best: discovering new and original voices, and helping debut writers launch their careers

palerThank you for judging The Bath Novel Award 2016. What are you hoping to find in our 2016 award entry pile?

As ever, I’m hoping to find someone whose writing makes it impossible for me to think about anything else. Something fresh and compelling with characters I’d follow anywhere.

palerNovel or synopsis – which do you read first?

The quality of the prose and appeal of the voice are both vital to me so I dive straight into the novel, then once I have a sense of the writing I’ll step back and look at the synopsis. Even the most brilliant novelists can struggle with their synopsis so I prefer my first impressions of a writer to come from their opening chapter.

The synopsis can be a real challenge but it’s worth spending some time refining it. For me, I prefer to see one page and want to come away from that page knowing whose story is being told, why that story is worth me following and how their story ends (I like spoilers/plot twists to be included). Don’t include character or chapter breakdowns as that just makes for a very stilted read.

Sometimes, if you’re unsure which parts of the plot to include in the synopsis, it can help to say the story out loud to someone to get a sense of where the plot isn’t clear/which bits make their eyes glaze over/what parts make them sit up and pay attention….

And always think about what makes your book unique. Is it the setting? The circumstances? The concept? The narrator? Don’t include too much detail, just make sure your synopsis includes the most intriguing, crucial parts of the story.

palerAny Page One pet hates or no-no’s?

CW2-603x402Receiving around 250 submissions a week, I have, over the years, developed some pet niggles when it comes to the opening page. For me the main culprit is overwriting and I think this is more evidence of the pressure put on writers to impress from the first line, rather than a reflection of poor writing.

So much emphasis is placed on wowing the reader early on that the first page can often become overwritten and dense. Of course a writer does need to impress and hook their reader quickly, but my advice would be to be very careful with the number of similes, metaphors and descriptors. Overuse doesn’t show skill with words so much as a lack of confidence, and it often doesn’t reflect what the rest of the book is like.

My other niggle on opening pages is the classic telling rather than showing. Again, I think this comes from a desire to really immerse the reader and tell them exactly where they are, who their characters are, but telling makes for a very flat reading experience. We don’t need to know everything straight away, better to gradually, organically reveal things.

palerHow important is the title?

Titles change all the time; it’s not the be all and end all at this early stage but a cracking title is eye-catching, so if you’ve got something that conveys some of the mood/originality/intrigue of the novel then fantastic. For instance, if 8874743WHEN GOD WAS A RABBIT or 5355888 (1)THE EARTH HUMS IN B FLAT or 81p08x8+eNL._SL1500_MY SISTER LIVES ON THE MANTLEPIECE had landed on my desk I’d have zoomed in on it immediately.

palerDoes a manuscript need to perfect be to win?

It doesn’t need to be perfect to win. The moment a manuscript needs to be perfect is when it goes to print. As an agent, I’m very hands-on editorially so I look for talent that has big potential (potential that can be realised through close editorial work), and I’ll be looking for the same thing for the Bath Novel Award.

palerWhat do you look for in the storytelling?

I’m a real sucker for voice. I adore an all-embracing, distinctive voice – after all, I’m going to be spending a lot of time with this narrator so I want it to be an enjoyable (and/or gripping) experience, regardless of whether I actually like them. I also look for assured storytelling. A writer who leads me through their novel confidently allows me to fall entirely into their hands, and this makes for a far more absorbing read than if the writer seems unsure of exactly what they are doing.

palerYou’re a fan of unexpected twists. Any tips for entrants on maintaining surprise and building suspense?

This is a tricky skill to master and a difficult question to answer. Conflict is important so there’s an element of, or potential for, the unexpected; threat is also vital for tension as everything is heightened when something is at stake for our characters. But really it’s all down to the execution.

palerWho are your favourite recent fictional characters?

Utterly, utterly biased I know, but my most recent favourite characters are from two forthcoming novels I represent. Each contain delightful, unforgettable duos and are perfect examples of exceptional characterisation, which was part of the reason I wanted to work with the authors: there’s mischief and innocence with Grace and Tilly in Joanna Cannon’s debut goats and sheepTHE TROUBLE WITH GOATS AND SHEEP; and charm meets eccentricity with Mahony and Mrs Cauley in Jess Kidd’s debut HIMSELF.

But in terms of recent non-work related reads, characters that have stayed in my head, and heart, are: Bernadette from WHERE’D YOU GO, BERNADETTE by Maria Semple, who is as warm as she is peculiar; 51P8aH9UJIL._SX325_BO1,204,203,200_I’ll never forget the endearing anomaly that is the ‘deathless man’ in THE TIGER’S WIFE by Tea Obreht; and though all the characters in 41clh8Uv6hL._SX320_BO1,204,203,200_LIFE AFTER LIFE by Kate Atkinson are exquisitely drawn but I particularly love gentle, ‘broken’ Ursula and her irrepressible aunt Izzie.

palerWhat are the most common character writing issues you see?

Two things spring to mind: a lack of voice (voice again!) and being unsympathetic. As I mentioned above, if I’m going to spend 300 odd pages with a character I either want to be rooting for them or intrigued by them. I tend to sympathise quite easily with really messed up characters who behave dreadfully, as long as I can see that their motivation comes from a well-intended place, even if it’s totally misjudged. If, on the other hand, the narrator is also the antagonist then I need to be intrigued by their character to compensate for the absence of sympathy.

palerYour wishlist includes literary fiction, book group/upmarket commercial women’s fiction, crime, psychological thrillers, suspense, YA, high-quality magical realism, science fiction and fantasy. Are there any genres you would not want to see on our shortlist?

If I’d been told THE POWER OF ONE was about boxing, I’d never have read it but I did and I adored it so I’d never exclude any type of book. I’m coming into this open-minded and will simply be looking for great characterisation, strong prose, a striking voice and a cracking plot.

palerYou like novels that blend genres. Are there any blends you’re especially keen to read?

I absolutely love speculative fiction, something with an ‘otherness’ to it, so an upmarket commercial or literary novel that has touches of magical realism, fantasy, dystopia or sci-fi would be marvellous. Especially if it appeals to the general reader.

palerYou represent our inaugural runner up, Ian Nettleton. What was it about his novel that made you want to sign him up?

Ian is an incredible, naturally gifted storyteller and I was immediately swept away by his stunning prose and deeply compelling characters. I also have a real soft spot for Australian fiction so the setting was particularly appealing to me on a personal level.

palerAny other advice for entrants?

Ensure that you polish your work as much as you can, but other than that all I’d say is good luck and I’m looking forward to reading your novel!

palerThe Bath Novel Award 2016 Rules

  • The Bath Novel Award is a competition open to writers of any nationality who have yet to be traditionally published
  • For the purposes of this competition, “traditionally published” is defined as “having accepted an offer of publication with advance payment.” Self-published novels are eligible
  • Novels can be in any genre written for adult or young adult (13+) readers. Children’s novels are not eligible
  • The winner of The Bath Novel Award 2016 will receive £2,000 plus our Minerva trophy designed by artist Jessica Palmer
  • One shortlisted writer will receive a Consultancy Report (8 to 12 pages approx.) from Cornerstones Literary Consultancy plus a 1.5 hour (including preparation) follow up session with an editor, (either in person, via email or Skype). This prize may be exchanged for vouchers from Cornerstones to the value of £400 (US$620) towards any editorial report or mentoring hours in either Cornerstones’ US or UK house. There is no cash alternative to this prize
  • Entries are open from October 13th, 2015 until the close (GMT) of April 10th, 2016
  • Submissions should include (up to) the first 5,000 words of your novel, double-spaced in a size 12 font. Your synopsis should be one page, single spaced in a size 12 font
  • As entries are read ‘blind’, your name should NOT appear anywhere in your extract/synopsis document
  • The entrance fee is £22 per novel and you may enter as many novels as you wish.
  • Longlistees will be contacted in April 2016 and invited to submit their full (at least 50,000 words) manuscript for the final judging stages
  • Shortlisted novels will be announced in June 2016
  • The winner of The Bath Novel Award 2016 will be announced in July 2016
  • Novels must be your original work and in English
  • Entrants must be 16 years or over
  • The winner agrees to an interview which may be published on our site and in any media for publicity purposes
  • Entrants retain full copyright, however by entering, all shortlisted entrants give permission for us to post an extract of up to 5,000 words on our site
  • Entrants may be agented, but should not be represented by any agent at Conville & Walsh Literary Agency
  • Entrants employed by The Bath Novel Award, Conville & Walsh or Cornerstones Literary Consultancy are not eligible
  • Submissions may not be altered after entry
  • Entries which do not comply with the competition rules may be disqualified

palerHow to Enter The Bath Novel Award 2016

First, pay the entry fee of £22 per novel by one of three options:

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  • Debit/credit card or PayPal account payment via the ‘Buy Now’ button
  • Cheque/postal orders (£GB only) payable to “The Bath Novel Award” and sent to: The Bath Novel Award, PO Box 5223, Bath, BA1 0UR, England, UK
  • Bank transfer: account number 22562591 (“The Bath Novel Award”) Sort Code 60-24-77 (Natwest Bank, Bath), referencing your novel’s title

Then submit your novel by one of the two below options:

  • ONLINE: Save your novel extract (up to the first 5,000 words) and synopsis (one page) together in ONE pdf, .docx or Word document, then email to quoting your novel’s title in the subject box. In the text of your email, please state your name, address, telephone number, novel title, genre, extract and approximate full manuscript word counts, plus your method of entry fee payment, mentioning if payment is made under a different name. Online entries are acknowledged by return email. (Please allow 24 hours for acknowledgement of any additional entries.)
  • POSTAL: Mail your novel extract (up to the first 5,000 words) and synopsis (one page) to: The Bath Novel Award, PO Box 5223, Bath, BA1 0UR, England, UK together with a covering page stating your name, address, telephone number, novel title, genre, extract and approximate full manuscript word counts, plus your method of entry fee payment. (Please enclose an SAE if you would like acknowledgement).

palerBath Novel Award Success Stories

precocious cover (134x215)Two thirds of unagented shortlistees have accepted offers of representation from top literary agencies, one in three shortlisted writers have won publishing deals. babydoll2014 winner Joanna Barnard’s PRECOCIOUS  (Ebury hardback July 2015) was sold in a four way publishing auction. The first in Eugene Lambert’s SIGN OF ONE trilogy is to be published in Spring 2016 by Egmontwhilst US writer Hollie Overton accepted a major publishing deal with Penguin Random House for her 2015 shortlisted thriller BABY DOLL.

If YOU have written or are writing a novel, we would love the chance to read it!

The Bath Novel Award 2016 is open for entries until 10 April 2016.